Editing process, going slow, but going

I looked at myself in the mirror.

I looked into the mirror at myself.

I looked in the mirror at myself.

At myself, in the mirror, I looked      (Yoda’s voice)

There was a mirror. I looked in it.

Looking in the mirror…

I looked in the mirror.  My hair looked great.

Fifteen chapters to go.



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2 responses to “Editing process, going slow, but going

  1. Did you know that speaking Turkish is just like speaking “Yoda”?

    Good luck with the editing.

  2. Really? Know that, I did not.

    Thanks 🙂

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