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Advice to myself, and anyone else

Sometimes I discover and rediscover basic truths that anyone who writes already knows. One of them is the power of revision. The other day I finished a great chapter which I wrote in a flurry of inspiration. The next day I went back and wondered what I’d been thinking, writing that drivel. Not the content, that was fine. No, the skill with which I’d crafted it–it was horrible. Lots of “that” and and words words doubled or overused and all the things that make you roll your eyes when reading amateur writing. It’s enough to lead you to despair. Where I’m going with this is that I went back and rewrote it a little here and there and watched it shape up nicely.  Still not great, nothing close to perfect–but closer. Good enough to let me move on to the next chapter, then the next and so on.

Ok, going back to the grind . . .

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Uh oh, speed trap!

 

Ok, so here I am writing at 105 miles an hour and along comes the reality police to ruin all my fun.  The problem is, I’ve only been to a few countries, and my main character isn’t traveling to any of those. Now I’m going back and forth between YouTube and Google images and satellite maps and travel guides, trying to get my guy believably from point A to B and one day maybe to Z, and I hate that I had to slow down.  The good news is it seems to be coming together–not too technical, not too wordy, not looking like I’m getting it all from Google and/or travel books.  My strategy is to get enough in there so I don’t have to keep it up.  Just enough believability so I can get to what really matters: the story.

My main enemies:

  1. Local rules and behavior
  2. Local prices
  3. Finding pictures of the places I want to see.

I shouldn’t complain–we’re really pampered these days with all the technology at our fingertips.

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I’m a writing machine (lately)

I don’t get it. When I wrote my first novel (working on an agent now), it took me 2 years and every sentence was like pulling teeth, most of the time. Now I’m 60 TNR pages into my next book after about 3 weeks and every time I sit down the words just spill forth. I know exactly where I’m going and I just go there, taking various happy detours along the way and all that. I’m getting easily a thousand words a day, sometimes more, and twice that on the weekends.  My wife thinks I’m avoiding her and all I do is research my book at work (it’s a caper).

 

Since I’m the writer, all I can do is hope it’s good 🙂

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